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RACCOON I went a walk with my dogs in the park near my house in the afternoon. An animal suddenly appeared in front of me and passed by.... It was a raccoon! I was very suprised that raccoon lives in the park! I have never seen it except to zoo. Then I went back to home and made a birthday movie by iphone for my boyfriend. He loved it!! I hope I can spend birthday with him next year....

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RACCOON

I went on a walk with my dogs (or took my dogs for a walk) in the park near my house in the afternoon.
 
An animal suddenly appeared in front of me and passed by...

It was a raccoon!

I was very suprised that a raccoon lived in the park!

I have never seen one except at the zoo. 
 
Then, I went back home and made my boyfriend a movie for his birthday with my iphone.

He loved it!!

I hope I can spend his birthday with him next year....

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RACCOON

I went to take a walk with my dogs (Or I went to walk my dogs) in the park near my house in the afternoon.

An animal suddenly appeared in front of me and passed by....

It was a raccoon!

I was very suprised that raccoons live in the park!

I have never seen it except at the zoo.

Then I went back to home and made a birthday movie with my iphone for my boyfriend.

He loved it!!

I hope I can spend his birthday with him next year....

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