Hi Lorenza,

Great introduction!! Playing guitar and drawing are definitely fun hobbies to spend your time. I allowed myself to make only a couple of corrections on your paragraph.

1) Hi everyone my name is Lorenza and I am from Réunion island . I am have 14 years old. (Unlike French or Spanish when we say J’ai 14 ans, when telling your age in English, we must say I am, You/we/You(plural) /they are, and He/she is…...years old)

2) My hobbies are is playing guitar, learning new languages and drawing. (the list of hobbies contains more than one item; therefore, it’s considered plural)

I hope this small lecture helps. A bientot :)