My dream
In the future I want to live in Denver, Colorado. Why? Because I am a fan of the NFL team of Denver, the Denver Broncos. Yes, the american football is my favourite sport. I am a musician too. I play the trumpet and I love it. My favourite music to play with my trumpet is jazz. Please, if anyone is from USA (English native speakers) send me a request. I would like to improve my english!!!!! I want to live in a country where I need the english!!
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My dream
In the future I want to live in Denver, Colorado. Why? Because I am a fan of Denver's NFL team, of Denver, the Denver Broncos. Yes, the American football is my favourite sport. I am a musician too. I play the trumpet and I love it. My favourite music to play with my trumpet is jazz. Please, if anyone is from USA (English native speakers) send me a request. I would like to improve my English!!!!! I want to live in a country where I need to speak english!!
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April 25, 2015...Hello Ann, my name is Dr. Priscilla. I read with interest about your dream. You are doing exactly what you need to do in reaching out to a very large community of helpers. Please listen to the recorded message, read my profile and if this seems to be a good fit for you or any member, I would love to have you as a student.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s00OqvlQ2m8j
SKYPE ID: priscilla0856
My profile page: http://www.italki.com/user/1344884
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