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Gift Gift Oh my goodness!!! I got stuff from someone I know. She went to go on a trip a few days ago which was Hawaii. ( When can I go on a trip, Hawaii like her??? ) And she told me, " I bought these for you " during traveling. As you can see, there are some gift and it makes me in a good mood. A "Anna & Elsa" book and a chocolate are for my kids and a KONA coffee and a NONI soap are mime. First of all, I was really glad her though to think of me.

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Gift Gift

Oh my goodness!!!
I got stuff gifts from someone I know. a friend/ an acquaintance.
She went to go on a trip a few days ago which was to Hawaii.
( When can I go on a trip, to Hawaii like her??? )
And she told me, " I bought these for you during while traveling." 
As you can see, there are some gifts and it makes they put me in a good mood.
She gave me an "Anna & Elsa" book and chocolates are for my kids and a KONA coffee and a NONI soap for me are mime.
First of all, I was really glad her though to think she thought of me.

 

Good work! 

 

Tips:

"as you can see":  If you post a picture, you can write "as you can see."  But if we cannot see, you cannot write it.

"First of all":  this is used with a list.  First, second, third.  Without "second, third"...first sounds strange.

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