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Proposal for including hockey in our Student associatioin
The Students’ association wants to increase the number of clubs at the colleage. Some of these clubs will cater for students’s hobbies. Please write a proposal suggesting why your favorite hobby should be included and justifying its inclusion.
The aim of this proposal is to suggest the inclusion of hockey in our student’s association.
Hockey is a team sport, having so the great benefits of team sports, which in conventional wisdom is called the as five C’s: competence, confidence, connections, character and caring, which are considered critical components of positive youth development, even it could even be a way to engage students who are new in the city, especially for those who are shy or have behavioral problems.
Stressing From what I can gather from Psychological literature about team sports, it seems that practicing this kind of sport improves academic achievement are improved, as well as higher self-esteem.
Regarding the investment required, it would not be overly expensive as the surface area needed would be recycled from those* abandoned tennis courts. Apart from the initial installations, this kind of courts doesn’t need so much maintenance, so hockey becomes in an ideal sports, not just because of due to its benefits but also because it's for being an economical solution.
So, In conclusion, I would strongly recommend that hockey should added in our students’ association, on the grounds that playing this sport is good for physical and mental health, and maybe some would say for the greater good.
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