杨小洋
I watched a movie Tonight I watched a movie with my friends. It is a Japanese movie called Stand By Me. The movie is about friendship between a little boy and a cat-from-the-future Doraemon. At first, all of us think it is a little borning,while gratually I think this movie is heart-warming, and I even cried, which surprised my friends. Maybe i am a person who are easily moved by someone or something. Now it is a little late here,I need go to sleep, good night to everyone.
2. Juni 2015 13:55
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I Watched a Movie

Tonight I watched a movie with my friends. It was (is) a Japanese movie called Stand By Me. The movie was (is) about the friendship between a little boy and a cat-from-the-future, Doraemon. At first, all of us thought it was (think it is) a little boring but gradually (borning,while gratually) I found the movie to be (think this movie is) heart-warming, and I even cried, which surprised my friends. Maybe am a person who is (are) easily moved by someone or something. Now it is a little late here, I need go to sleep, good night to everyone.

 

Nicely written. Just need to be careful with using the correct tense.

2. Juni 2015
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