Hello Laia,

Below, my suggestions - besides the grammar itself, I tried to modify the sentence construct somewhat to help with the flow of thoughts. 

I may be missing something here, but the logic construct of your essay seems to presume certain assumptions that are not clear to the reader, so it makes some of your sentences harder to interprete. If you would like to discuss this in more detail, please feel free to send me a msg to my inbox.

Good luck in your studies!

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My opinion about the english's subject.

This year has been a few different.<em>(I am not sure if you meant to say, This year has been very different, or This year has been the same...from a logic perspective, I cannot connect this sentence to the next)</em>

For me it is my fourth year of studying the degree in Architecture. All of us knew that we needed to attain the level B2 is necessary in English to achieve this degree so and we needed it something which will demonstrate help us to validate that we have attained the level., such as the B2 certificate, other higher level, to pass the English subject… Actually We have many options,opportunities to realize this level but yet, many of us leave it for a later time, when we think we will have more time or something like this, and, but in my opinion, we are wrong in delaying this attainment. (I think the yellow highlights should be present tense to be consistent with the rest of your paragraph, plus it is still something you are going through now, I assume.)

In my case I had not studied English since I finished high school, in a total lapse of three years, which has been is an important point, because as more time passes, it becomes more difficult is to follow the thread of the subject., such as all In life, if you are not constant do not keep up with something, you fall behind.

However I only had two choices ways, either to study hard or to surrender, but, to learn the English language is necessary for me to us, so I chose the first option. I recognise that the way has not been easy easier; I have had to study a lot, at some times more than in for other subjects. Perhaps, this is the biggest drawback of this subject. I know it is very important to us (me, since you are talking about yourself), but, in my opinion, sometimes the subject has taken too much time.

On the other hand, I know that all the time spent has had results and it helps me paid off and I have to improved in this subject, so I do not regret having spent itthe time. In general I think the subject goes on good way(is good?) and the activities help the students to improve. (And about this experience I have learned, in addition to the English language, that now I never will leave to learn it.) - sorry, don't understand enough to be able to help here - you seemed to be referring to 2 subjects here - learning the english language and something else, that you will not stop learning...