My visit to sharm el sheikh

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"last September, i went to sharm el sheikh with my friends , i spent 3 days and 4 night in this beautiful city , we were  full of energy on the trip ,we barely slept , we wanted to do every thing and visit all the places ,but we couldn't ,on the first day we were tired from the eight hour road trip , so we rested for a while and had dinner, then we went to naama bay and took a walk , next day we went to aqua blu sharm it was really fun , we played the whole day and we weren't even tired . next day we woke up early to go on the safrai trip into the desert , we learned how to use the buggy and then we drove at high speed through the sand dunes and we were shouting so loud we could hear our echoes . after that we watched the magical sunrise then we rested at Bedouin tent where we enjoyed the tea it was a unique experience . on the last day we went to the beach and we enjoyed and swam in the sea and then we went Parasailing i had to overcome my fears for this one because it was difficult, i was attached to a large parachute and a speed boat and i took a ride through the sky .the view was extraordinary, it was a great experience . at night we took a walk to soho square the next day we traveled back to Cairo. it was an amazing trip and the company was great. next time i will visit Ras Mohamed National Park , and try the glass boat and diving"