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The new Old (part 1) The Moscow Kremlin has been, perhaps, the most attractive sight for tourists visiting the capital of Russia. As regards to native Muscovites a visit the Kremlin was another check mark in the schedule in primary schools. The Tsar Cannon, the Tsar Bell, The Armoury Chamber, Ivan the Great Bell-Tower- everything is familiar in these words, but how it is eventually forgotten. In may I had a unique opportunity after 17 years to visit the heart of the capital and the whole Russia. And I was amazed and surprised. On a rainy and inclement day the Kremlin without any shadow of shyness showed its magnificence. There were shiny, almost polished, golden domes of the cathedrals; like toys the towers of the Kremlin wall, carefully surrounded by trees; a gorgeous lilac, creating the familiar and attractive aroma and, of course, the sea of the brightest colors of the Tainitsky and Alexandrovsky gardens! I don’t remember that I’ve ever seen such a beauty of a regular park in Moscow. My journey began with the Armoury Chamber, the oldest Russian treasure-house. The splendor of “glass” world gradually began to return my childhood memories: the carriages, dresses, medals, weapons, thrones, watches, armor, utensils and crowns - all that is the brightest examples of the historical epochs and rich culture of Russia. Then - the churches of the Cathedral Square. By noon in the Kremlin there were already a huge crowds scurrying back and forth, taking with them the residual particles of time, but in this fussy chaos there was a place of true story - a small cellar, that shows the real treasures of the past millennium: a completely crude and not restored finds : tiny coin-scales; remnants of chain armour, eaten by time; some utensils ... all that is among the walls that know and remember. I was pleased to be there. ...

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The new Old (part 1)

The Moscow Kremlin has been, perhaps, the most attractive sight for tourists visiting the capital of Russia. As regards to native Muscovites, a visit to the Kremlin was another check mark in the schedule in primary schools. The Tsar Cannon, the Tsar Bell, The Armoury Chamber, Ivan the Great Bell-Tower- everything is familiar in these words, but how it is eventually forgotten.
In May I had a unique opportunity after 17 years to visit the heart of both the capital and the whole of Russia. And I was amazed and surprised.
On a rainy and inclement day the Kremlin without any shadow of shyness showed its magnificence.
There were shiny, almost polished, golden domes of the cathedrals; like toys the towers of the Kremlin wall, carefully surrounded by trees; a gorgeous lilac, creating the familiar and attractive aroma and, of course, the sea of the brightest colors of the Tainitsky and Alexandrovsky gardens! I don’t remember that I’ve ever seen such a beauty of a regular park in Moscow.
My journey began with the Armoury Chamber, the oldest Russian treasure-house.
The splendor of “glass” world gradually began to return my childhood memories: the carriages, dresses, medals, weapons, thrones, watches, armor, utensils and crowns - all that is are the brightest examples of the historical epochs and rich culture of Russia.
Then - the churches of the Cathedral Square.
By noon in the Kremlin there were already a huge crowds scurrying back and forth, taking with them the residual particles of time, but in this fussy chaos there was a place of true story - a small cellar, that shows the real treasures of the past millennium: a completely crude and not restored finds : tiny coin-scales; remnants of chain armour, eaten by time; some utensils ... all that is among the walls that know and remember. I was pleased to be there.
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Beautifully written! Just a few small details that could be improved upon. Great job!

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