Verry good weather)))))
I verry verry like good weather, because in St.Petersborg offen bad weather.But in the last days all time the sun shines,and so much fun and well, that I want to laugh))) But very cold...)))))
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Verry good weather)))))
I verry verry like good weather, because in St.Petersborg offen bad weather.But in the last days all time the sun shines,and so much fun and well, that I want to laugh))) But very cold...)))))Hi Stefani!
This is a very nice piece of writing!... and I decided to "jazz it up" for you... just to make it even better! :-))
Very Good Weather!)))))
I appreciate good weather very much, because in St. Petersburg -- where I live! -- the weather is usually very, very bad! But in the last few days the sun has been shining all the time, and this gives me so much fun and pleasure, that it makes me want to laugh!))) So we have sun -- yes! -- but it's still very cold!...)))))
1. very (not verry)
2. very much like (not very like)
3. often (not offen)
4. there often is bad weather (you need the verb "is")
5. all the time (you need "the")
6. "gives me" so much fun... or "I am having" so much fun.
7. Start each word in the title with a capital letter.
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Very good weather)))))
ISorry I couldn't understand the rest.
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