jessicalee's notebook entry: Feb 17, 2011
Time has passed so quickly, my winter holiday will be over. I feel very grudge. I also don't know what let me grudge, but the life is always going. Mom, I haven't leave ,and I began to miss you . I perfer to do more housework every day, cook, listen to your nagging. As long as you can here with me. I love you so much . I don’t want you work so hard and overworked. I can do anything for you . After five months, you can see me again. I will work harder and make me don’t miss you so much. And thanks “italki” let me have so many friends. You let me know the wider world . I hope we can study together. I think it must be a happy and meaningful thing. Do you think so?
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jessicalee's notebook entry: Feb 17, 2011
Time has passed so quickly, my winter holiday will soon be over. I feel very sad. I don't know why I am sad, but life is always moving forward. Mom, I haven't left yet ,and I am already missing you . I don't mind doing housework (cooking, listening to your nagging) as long as I can be with you. I love you so much. I don’t want you to work so hard. I can do anything for you. In five months, we can see each other again. I will work hard and try not to miss you so much.And thanks “italki” let me have so many friends. You let me know the wider world . I hope we can study together. I think it must be a happy and meaningful thing. Do you think so? Yes.
-I hope this helps. Your entry was very good from the beginning, and I could clearly understand what you meant. Nice job!
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