Ariel
Just want to make sure this note is correct or not! In this industry, boss must be objective analysis everything. It must happen in the future to somebody's subordinate, because we are business partner who are neither manager nor underling. Someone showed his/her attitudes and expressions just like told me that I am a subordinate not a partner. Everyone is selfish, no one will stand on other people's position to think what it will make us feel good. I need to think how to make me feel good. That's all enough! Just tell me, I have never become this type of person in the future. I appreciate a lot, and I have learned a lot.
28. Juli 2015 02:34
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Just want[ed] to make sure [if] this note is correct!

 

In this industry, [the] boss must [] objective[ly] analy[ze] everything. It must happen in the future to somebody's subordinate, because we are business partner[s] who are neither manager nor [direct report]. Someone [who] show[s] his/her attitudes and expressions just like [me] told me that I am a subordinate[,]not a partner. Everyone is selfish[;] no one [] stand[s] on other people's position [and] think [that] it will make us feel good. I need to think how to make [myself] feel good. That's all enough! Just tell me, I [will] never become this type of person in the future. I appreciate a lot and I have learned a lot.

 

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I'm not sure if I captured what you wanted to say. Maybe include the Chinese text in a comment?

28. Juli 2015
This is quite difficult to correct as it is not clear enough what you want to say.
28. Juli 2015
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