Elizabeth
The thoughts of the 3 in the Morning.. Morpheus, you there? It will be 3 a.m. and I still not got to sleep, thinking about everything that happened on this day that was very strange because it was good and bad, I ate with my friends and traveled in a small boat of my beautiful city, but at the end when I back home on the bus one guy would be exceeded to me,he was drunk, fortunately my friends accompanied me and nothing happened, but then I thought of my digital camera broke yesterday, I love to take pictures so this was very bad for me. After I started to think about the guy I have talked so much and now it seems to ignore me, so I thought I've been saltier these days that the Dead Sea and that no apparent reason unless there's something I'm doing wrong and I deserves this, or simply it is the life that has been very good and generous to me and now want to apply some justice at my case.
3. Aug. 2015 09:55
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The thoughts of 3 in the Morning.. Morpheus, you there? (3 AM Thoughts.. Morpheus, you there?)

It will be 3 a.m. and I still haven't gone to sleep, thinking about everything that happened today that was very strange because it was good and bad. I ate with my friends and traveled in a small boat through my beautiful city, but at the end when I got back home on the bus one guy was excessive towards me; he was drunk. Fortunately my friends accompanied me so nothing happened, but then I thought of my digital camera breaking yesterday. I love taking pictures so this was very bad for me. Afterwards, I started to think about the guy I have talked to so much (recently) and now he seems to ignore me; so I thought I've been saltier these days than the Dead Sea and for no apparent reason unless there's something I'm doing wrong and I deserve this (or simply, life has been very good and generous to me and now wants to deal me some justice).

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It was hard to understand this paragraph, but you're writing pretty complex sentences so the errors are sophisticated :).

5. August 2015
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