Ivana
Travelling. Travelling is the best way to know yourself because you can live many experiences and meet different people. Certainly the most of theses experiences you won't forget. The opportunity to meet new people and listen new stories is awesome. I prefer spend my money on trips than on other things. Actually,this isn't an expense, it's an investment. Every trip is unique and makes me feel different. I love buying and using a new perfume with each new trip because when I back home and use the perfume I'll remember several times the trip. Travelling is awesome and I hope to travel much more.
29. Aug. 2015 01:33
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Travelling.

Travelling is the best way to know yourself because you can live will have many experiences and meet different people. Certainly the most of theses experiences you won't forget the experiences you have. The opportunity to meet new people and listen new stories is awesome.
I prefer to spend my money on trips than on other things. For me Actually, this travelling isn't an expense, it's an investment. Every trip is unique and makes me feel different.
I love buying and using a new perfume with each new trip because when I come back home and use the perfume I'll remember the trip several times the trip. Travelling is awesome and I hope to travel much more.

 

Your English is very good Ivana.  These are very small corrections.  Very you soon you won't have anything left to correct : P

P.S.  I hope you do travel much more

29. August 2015
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Travelling.

Travelling is the best way to know yourself because you can enjoy alot of experiences and meet different people. It's certain that the experiences are things you won't forget. The opportunity to meet new people and listen to new stories is awesome.
I prefer to spend my money on trips then on other things. Actually,this isn't an expense, it's an investment. Every trip is unique and makes me feel different.
I love buying and using a new perfume with each new trip because when I return/get back home and use that perfume I'll remember the trip several times. Travelling is awesome and I hope to travel much more(or more often)

29. August 2015
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