Misato's notebook entry: Feb 25, 2011

Hello,My name is Misato.I'm 21.
I want to learn English.
I like various music and movie,Therefore,I wish to understand phrase of language.
and I want to make friends of overseas.
and I'll take a post in the company of Web design. and get working in this Apr,but I'm still student majoring in design until this Mar.

Can you make me a correction,Please?

I like various music and movie, therefore I want to learn English to understand phrases and expression .（とかね

And（文章の初めは大文字）and 連続使いすぎ、それか文章をつなげる。
of⇒from
,but （コンマの後は1個スペースあけるのがお決まり。ピリオッドの場合2個ね。）
student（この場合"a student"　になるよ。なんでaなのかはちょっと調べさせてください・・・説明できない。）
月は省略してる時は、日にちとを書くときね。（例：Mar.21.2011）。　文章書くときは完璧に書いてね。

おつかれさまでした！！！

Misato's notebook entry: Feb 25, 2011

1. Always capitalize the first word of a sentence, but not the first word after a comma ','.
2. Try to avoid starting a sentence with words like 'and' or 'but.'
3. Always put a space ' ' after punctuation like ',' and '.'.

Good job and good luck!)