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Universe
Now I'm very satisfied because I bought my ticket to 'Universo Paralello' at Pratigi Beach, Bahia!
This festival won't be only about music or only electronic music. (not wrong, but you can also write):
This festival won't be only about music or electronic music.
It's about nine days living in a community with differents people during the reveillon party and more another six days traveling around the sea of the northeast.
They are strangers who like the same things:, as yoga, nature, the beach, surfing, the sun, camping, art, music and e-music of course, with a good vibe and peace. I wanted to go to there since my I was fifteen years, but this festival is very crazy and just now I think I'm prepared for this... hahah
Universe
Now I'm very satisfied (excited, etc.) because I bought my ticket to 'Universo Paralello' at Pratigi Beach, Bahia! This festival won't be only about music or even electronic music. It's about nine days living in a community with differents people during the reveillon party and more than six days traveling around the northeastern sea. They are strangers who like the same things: as yoga, nature, the beach, surfing, the sun, camping, art, music and of course e-music of course with a good vibe and beat. I wanted to go to there since I was my fifteen years-old, but this festival is very crazy and I think that it's only just now that I think I'm prepared for this... hahah
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