Tasty snacks in my school canteen

Hi, everyone. I am a student from a school whose snacks are incrediably tasty. Best of all, they were served at night.and that resulted in a miracle in our school. Every night before 9:00 pm, the gate of our building was always overcrowded. Students anxiously waited for the gate to open - kind of prison-like ,right? Just kidding. As soon as the gate was opened,we rushed out, at the speed of a one hundred metre dash to the canteen. After a long time standing in line, we got it at last! There were noodles, dumplings, roasted beef, curry and even porridge.we shared our food with classmates and enjoyed our school life a lot.

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