First notebook entry: Introducing myself

嗨，我是茉莉花。我正在學習中文，因為我愛中國。我想有一天去中國。再見

frankly i have to tell u that this essay r well done 4 a beginner. i wish u would get even more progress later. btw, i am a chinese, and i can learn english from u.

可以看出，你这篇小短文还是写的不错，没有什么语病，说的也比较地道。 对于初学者来说是很难得的，下一步你可以尝试每句话写的长一点，OK？ 加油吧
for ex:嗨，各位朋友，我叫茉莉花，很高兴在这里遇到中国的朋友。 因为我很爱中国并且希望有朝一日能到中国，所以我现在刻苦地学习中文。 希望能在这里在见到你们!

Ur chinese is quite good actually just one slip:

嗨，我是（叫）茉莉花。我正在學習中文，因為我愛中國。我想有一天去中國。再見

When we intorcude ourselves in english, it's okay to say "I'm Jasmine" but in Chinese, we'd better use the verb “叫" to replace "是". Also, u could say "我的名字叫茉莉花"(My name is Jasmine)

Hope u could help u