Introduction

Asalaamualaikum! Mein Sadia hoon aur main laadki hoon. Main atthara saal ki hoon. Mere abu Pakistani hain aur meri ammi Cuban hain. Mere ustaad Monu hain aur woh achai ustaad hain. Main buri laadki nahi hoon lekin main achi taliba hoon. Khoda hafiz :)

I think your Urdu is better .

Wish you good luck .

Introduction

Asalaamualaikum! Mein Sadia hoon [aur main aik laadki ladki (short vowel sound) hoon - It is obvious from the name that you are a girl]. Main atthara saal ki hoon. Mere abu Pakistani hain aur meri ammi Cuban Cuba se  (from cuba - the word "Cuban" does not exist in Urdu) hain. Mere ustaad ka naam Monu hain aur woh aik achay ustaad hain. Main buri laadki nahi hoon lekin / balke (rather) main aik achi taliba hoon. Khoda hafez :)