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Double Toy Poodles❤
Hello.
Today/tonight I met a big size toy poodle.
His name was "Moko-chan" (Moko means fluffy.)
He looked a lot like King, but King's body was bigger and skinnier than the other toy poodle.
He is often told that He looks like a deer.
They were so cute and fluffy.
They were the same size and color.
Today was a really good day.
Thank you for reading★
If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?❤
Thank you~
The first sentence you wrote was in past tense, therefore the rest of if should also be in the past tense :)
Double Toy Poodles❤
Hello.
I met saw a big size toy poodle.
His name is "Moko-chan" (Moko mean is fluffy.)
He looks like the a King.
King's body is big (big how? ex: long, or tall; because it can't mean fat since the next adjective you have is skinny ^_^) and skinny than other toy poodle.
He is often told he looks like a deer.
They are so cute and fluffy.
They are of the same size, same and color.
Today was a good day for me.
Thank you for reading.★
If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?❤
Thank you~
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Well done. (^-^)/
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