my home town people!

Uh, hey guys! Today I wanna want to speak about my home town Kumushdepe 's people. Kumush depe is a little town in northern Iran, in Golestan state.  It has very very kind people.  I LOVE my people.  Here we know each other and we have a good realationship together.  When one of us gets unhappy then all of us get unhappy too! When some one has a party then all of us take apart.
*this photo is my town .

(Good job.  Remember to capitalize the first letter in a sentence.  It makes a big difference!)