My car was near to be stolen.
One day I was at work. I heard alarm of my car. I opened the window ,a man got on his car and went back near my car and stop and look at around. I called my colleague and told him. this man might be a thief . he said: No can't be, It's just 9am.
Afterwards my neighbor came and that man went.
I went out to check my car, I noticed My car' window is a little open.
Then I check the security camera and I understood that man had walked 10 minutes around my car and tried to open the door.
I was regret not to write the number of his car and unfortunately quality of the camera wasn't good enough to recognize it.
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My car was about to get stolen
One day while I was at work, I heard my car's alarm. I opened the window & saw a man got on his car and turned back near to my car and stopped taking a look around. I called my colleague and told him that this man might have been a thief. he said, ''No, (it) can't be. It's just 9 in the morning''. Afterwards my neighbor arrived and the man left.I went out to check out my car & I noticed My car's window was a little open.
Then I looked at the security camera and I found out (or realized) that the man had walked around my car for 10 mins and tried to open the door. Unfortunately, quality of the camera wasn't good enough to make me recognize it, that's why I was regretful not to write the number of his car.
You need to pay more attention to the past tense structures.
If you want to explain the past tense, all the verbs need to be formed in their past.
Ex: I wanted to start a new life by travelling to Las Vegas.
Ex: Did you know where the subway station was?
Ex: I thought you were at home.
Ex: As I was travelling, I saw one of my best friends in Berlin. He was also my classmate in the second grade...
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My car was nearly to be stolen.
One day while I was at work, I heard my cars' alarm of my car. I opened the window, there was a man got on his car and went back standing near my car, he was looking and stop and look at around. I called my colleague and told him. He said that this man might be a thief. he said: "No he can't be, it's just 9a.m.," I replied.
Afterwards my neighbor arrived came and the that man left went.
I went out to check my car, I noticed My the cars' window was a little open.
Then I checked the security camera and I realised understood that the man had walked 10 minutes around my car for 10 minutes and tried to open the door.
I was regretted not to writing down the number of his car, and unfortunately, the quality of the camera wasn't good enough to show recognize it.
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Ignore this comment Somayeh, he is wrong and the two corrections you got are right. "Alarm of my car" is very a very passive construction, and you will never hear a native use it. Use "my car's alarm" as suggested, or in the US, you can say "my car window", using car as an adjective.
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Alarm of my car is correct, because your car is an object.
A burglar got on his car, went back toward my car , stopped and looked around while I was opening the window.
You have to read past continues tense and simple past.
I noticed that the window of my car...
You must use escaped instead of went, because he was a burglar.
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