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Jaime Oliver
My new life Last week, I went to visit a house with my brother. I am looking for a new home to living with my girlfriend. They have been together for six years and now we want and need to have a home own. She is a special woman, worked, easy-going, funny and friendly. She wants has a baby, like me. My family are more happy with our relationship. It is stunning, because I feel that all are happy. When I met her in the first time, I believed that she was rude and unfriendly, because she didn't saying nothing. But, weeks later, we started a stunning relation and from this moment we have done a lot of things together.
6. Jan. 2016 11:13
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My new life

Last week I went to visit a house with my brother. I am looking for a new home to live with my girlfriend. We have been together for six years and now we want and need to have our own home.
She is a special woman, hard-working, easy-going, funny and friendly. She wants to have a baby, like me. My family are very happy with our relationship. It is stunning, because I feel that all are happy.
When I met her the first time, I believed that she was rude and unfriendly, because she didn't saying anything. But, weeks later, we started a stunning relation and from this moment we have done a lot of things together.

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Beautiful entry! Only a few grammatical errors. 

Other synonyms of stunning can be: fantastic, amazing, sensational. Not identical meanings but in casual settings they mean more or less the same thing :)

Kind regards,

Henry

6. Januar 2016
happy life
6. Januar 2016
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