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Too calm
I was so tired today. I almost slept all day long. I must start a writing project (o, I must start wrting), but I guess it's is this summer weather. I made a lonely traveling trip alone this week. I went to a countryside village and visited the cemetery where my great grandfather was burried - he was a musician and kind of popular in that village. It was the most beatiful day I had in almost a year. The weather was perfect, and despite the fact that it was raining a lot in my country, it was a sunny day. Then I went to a little mountain near the village to visit a peace piece (o, plot of land) of land that belonged to my grandfather and then to my mother. We used to go there every summer, but when my parents were divorced we stopped going doing it. I took a bus and then walked about two hours through a beautiful landscape. I wish I can could go (ojalá pudiera ir) again next month, maybe with a friend maybe.
Too calm
I was so tired today, I almost slept all day long. I must start a writing, but I guess it is this summer weather. I made a was lonely traveling this week. I went to a contryside countryside village, visited the cemetery where my great grandfather was burried -he was a musician, who was kind of popular in that village. It was the most beatiful day I had in almost a year. The weather was perfect, and despite that it was raining a lot in my country, it was a sunny day. Then I went to a little mountain, near the village, to visit a -peace piece of land that belonged to my grandfather, and then to my mother. We used to go there every summer, but when my parents were divorced we stopped Doing it going. I took a bus and then walked about two hours through a beatiful landscape. I wish I can could go again next month, with a friend maybe.
The phrase "through a beautiful landscape" is technically correct but it would sound better to say "down a scenic road" or "through the beautiful countryside" or "through a beautiful part of the country" or something like that. I english we do not walk through a landscape. We look at landscapes. Again - I understood what you said and it is technically correct but not something we would say normally.
Too calm
I was so tired today, I almost slept all day long. I must start a writing, but I guess is this summer weather. I was lonely traveling this week. I went to a countryside village, visited the cemetery where my great grandfather was burried -he was a musician, who was kind of popular in that village. It was the most beatiful day I had in almost a year. The weather was perfect, and despite that it was raining a lot in my country, it was a sunny day. Then I went to a little mountain, near the village, to visit a piece of land that belonged to my grandfather, and then to my mother. We used to go there every summer, but when my parents were divorced we stopped going. I took a bus and then walked about two hours down a scenic road. I wish I could go again next month, with a friend maybe.
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