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Hello Hello, everyone. I come from china and I'm 28years old. I'm working at a big company in china and I don't have a house yet.:p I want to study English and help other people here. I want to know some people who from Oxford because(for?)I think the Oxford accent is very graceful. Of course, I also like talk with different people. no matter where are you from. if you want, send message to me.:)

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Hello everyone. I come from China and I'm 28 years old.
I'm working at a big company in China and I don't have a house yet.:p
I want to study English and help other people here. I would like to know some people who are from Oxford because I think the Oxford accent is very graceful.
Of course, I also like talk with different people no matter where you are from. If you want, send a message to me.:)

 

Hello Pat and welcome to italki,

 

Just a few small corrections in your introduction. The names of countries (and other place names) always begin with a capital (big) letter in English. We use 'would like' rather than 'want' because it is a wish rather than a demand.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

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