Magic of natural
After the stressful day i have in my work i sat on the garden there are this sounds coming from trees leafs
And there were some birds which were the reason of my
Quitness the garden was like my haven
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Magic of natural
After the stressful day I had at work, I sat in the garden. There were this sounds coming from leaves in the trees,and there were some birds which were the reason for my
quietness. The garden was like my haven
Well done. Very poetic. I put lines through unnecessary words. In the last sentence, you could write 'like', but I think it seems stronger as marked.
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Magic of nature
After the stressful day I had at work, I sat in the garden. There was a rustling coming from the tree leaves. There were also birds, which were the reason for my stillness. The garden was like my haven.
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