A comparison about Australian household energy use and Australian household greenhouse gas emission.

The Australian household energy usage. It seems the biggest percentage I used for heating. It takes approximately 50% of the energy. Some energy goes towards the following: heating up water is 30%, refrigerator is 7%, lighting is 4%, cooling is 2%, and the rest is for other appliances is 15%. They use only 2% for cooling.

The greenhouse gas emission. the biggest percentage is used for water heating, which it holds 32 % (of what?), additionally it is used for 14% of the refrigeration, 15% of the heating, 8% of the lighting , 3% cooling, and 28% for the other appliances. It is almost the same as the use of water heater. The smallest of it is for cooling, which is only 3%.

there are similarities with Australian household energy use compared to Australian household greenhouse gas emission. Both of them capture around 30 percentages for water heating. It proves water heating is a daily necessity.

NOtes: I juust rearranged things and reworded the areas with % in them to flow better. You should remember to have a topic and concludingsentence to each paragraph. You should try to add to the last paragraph. The highlighted party I wasn't sure wht that was of.