Clean room
Hello, my friends, this is my tenth notebook on italki. Today I cheaned my room by myself, is a great work. Now, the room is cheaned and I`m so tired. But I feeled happy because my room become clean again. Have you clean your room by yourself？
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Clean room
Hello, my friends, this is my tenth notebook on italki. Today I cheaned my room by myself, is a great work. Now, the room is cheaned and I`m so tired. But I feeled happy because my room become clean again. Have you clean your room by yourself？Corrected:
Clean room
Hello my friends. This is my tenth notebook on italki. Today I cleaned my room by myself, which was a lot of work. Now, the room is cleaned and I`m so tired. But I feel happy because my room has become clean again. Have you cleaned your room by yourself？
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