Caught in a lie
One day a friend invited me to go to the movie theater to watch a movie that I really didn't want to watch, it was some of this movies about ghosts and supernatural things that I can't stand, so to give a excuse I made up a story that I was very sick. I told him that I couldn't even walk of so much pain and the day him called me to watch the movie was the day that I would see a doctor. So the day has passed and it was friday (the day that my friend invited me to watch the movie), my mother called me to go to the shopping to walk with my family and I went. There who I found? Yes, my friend that called me to watch that horrible movie. When I saw him I was in shock, I completely forgot that I lie to him and told that I was sick. So I had to face the truth, I went to him and told all about my story only to don't watch the stupid movie. He felt very band and to compensate him I said goodbye to my family and went to watch the movie with him. And the moral, the movie wasn't so bad, actually it was very awesome!
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Caught in a Lie
One day a friend invited me to go to the movie theater to watch a movie that I really didn't want to watch, it was one of those movies about ghosts and supernatural things that I can't stand, so to give a excuse I made up a story that I was very sick. I told him that I couldn't even walk because of all the pain and the day he wanted to see the movie was the day that I would see a doctor.
Some days passed, and it was Friday (the day that my friend invited me to watch the movie). My mother called me to go to the shopping centre to walk with my family and I went. Who did I find there? Yes, my friend that called me to watch that horrible movie. When I saw him I was in shock, I completely forgot that I had lied to him and told that I was sick. So I had to face the truth, I went to him and told all about my story I had invented, all to avoid watching the stupid movie. He felt very bad and to make him feel better I said goodbye to my family and went to watch the movie with him. In the end, the movie wasn't so bad - actually it was very awesome!
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Caught in a Lie
One day a friend invited me to go to the movie theater to watch a movie that I really didn't want to watch. It was one of these movies about ghosts and supernatural things that I can't stand, so to give an excuse and made up a story that I was very sick. I told him that I couldn't even walk with so much pain and the day he called me to watch the movie was the day that I would see a doctor. So a day passed and it was Friday (the day that my friend invited me to watch the movie). My mother invited me to go shopping with my family and I went. There who did I find? Yes, my friend who called me to watch that horrible movie. When I saw him I was in shock. I completely forgot that I lied to him and said I was sick. So I had to face the truth. I went to him and told him all about my story only not to watch the stupid movie. He felt very bad and to compensate him I said goodbye to my family and went to watch the movie with him. And the moral, the movie wasn't so bad, actually it was very awesome!aha! What was the movie called (no lies, please)? I may watch it myself. I love ghost movies.
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