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She is my family! Hello, everyone! I'm Yumi :) I'm studying English. They're these days that I have begun to study English in earnest. English is studied at a junior high school and a high school in Japan, but I was hardly studying then X( The reason that I have begun to study English is I often talk with an overseas customer to my work. And I think more my world if I can speak, because English is a common language :) I'd like to be a friend who can speak English. Please correct me if I'm wrong- I would love to help with your Japanese! Message me & let' talk! Thank you :) A dog of this picture is my family! I love her! Her name is Marron! Because Her body hair is light brown :) So cuuuuuute!
6. Apr. 2016 06:07
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She is My Family!

Hello everyone! I'm Yumi :) I'm studying English. There are these days that I have begun to study English in earnest. English is studied at  junior high school and high school in Japan, but I was hardly studying it/English then ( The reason that I have begun to study English is I often talk with an overseas customer for my work. And I think more my world if [Not exactly sure what the meaning is here - are you saying that you can "know more of the world" or can "experience more of the world" ??]  I can speak English, because it is a common language :) I'd like to be a friend who can speak English. Please correct me if I'm wrong [What you have written here is technically correct, but it would be more accurate to write something like "Please correct my mistakes" rather than "Please correct me if I am wrong". This is because using the word 'wrong' here suggests the ideas are incorrect, rather than the English being incorrect"]- I would love to help with your Japanese! Message me & let' talk! Thank you :)

A dog of this picture is my family! I love her! Her name is Marron! Because Her body hair is light brown :) So cuuuuuute!


You're doing really well Yumi! Keep it up, and sorry if the corrections are a little bit pedantic!

6. April 2016

She is my family!

Hello, everyone! I'm Yumi :) I'm studying English. These are the days that I have begun to study English more seriously. English is taught and studied in junior high school and high school in Japan, but I was hardly studying then. X( The reason that I have begun to study English is  I often talk with an overseas customer through/for my work. And I think I can expand my world if I can speak English, because English is a common language. :) I'd like to have a friend who can speak English. Please correct me if I'm wrong- I would love to help with your Japanese! Message me & let's talk! Thank you :)

The dog of this picture is my family! I love her! Her name is Marron! Because her body hair is light brown :) So cuuuuuute!


すごいです❣ よしごとユミさん。^_^ あなたのえいごはすばらしです。

9. April 2016
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