Do you think people at work should wear a uniform? In my opinion, the dress-code should depend on which kind of company it is. In most of the traditional companies, people at work should wear a unifo

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Do you think people at work should wear a uniform? In my opinion, the dress-code should depend on which kind of company it is. In most of the traditional companies, people at work should wear a uniform. Because it has become a culture of the company. There are many experienced collogues who have been working for decades. They used to wear a suit. If a new employee dressed informal, he/she would like a staff from another company. When it comes to the startup companies, the employees could wear casual clothes in normal time. There are more young people in the startup companies. The relaxing environment let them feel free and creativity. But on certain days , they should wear a uniform.

21. Apr. 2016 08:54

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Angela-Jisu has offered nice alternatives, so this is just grammatical.

Do you think people at work should wear a uniform?

In my opinion, the dress-code should depend on which kind of company it is.
In most of the traditional companies, people at work should wear a uniform. B because it has become 1* a culture of the company 2*. There are many experienced colleagues who have been working for decades. They are used to wearing3* a suit. If a new employee dressed informally, he/she would look like a member of staff from another company.
When it comes to the startup companies, the employees could wear casual clothes in normal most of time. There are more young people in the startup companies. The relaxing relaxed4* environment lets them feel free and promotes/encourages creativity5*. But on certain days , they should wear a uniform.

1* I would have used present- it is company culture.

2* you can also say - company culture , or maybe part of the company culture

3* used to + infinitive = past habit, to be used to + ing = accustomed to.

4* relaxing - makes them feel good. eg Relaxing music relaxed - not strict

5* or - lets them feel free and creative.

Clearly and concisely answers the question. Errors are minimal and a lot of the vocabulary and expressions sound natural and good- working for decades, on certain days, etc.

24. April 2016

Do you think people at work should wear a uniform?

In my opinion, the dress-code dress code should depend on which kind of company it is.
In most of the traditional companies, people at work should wear a uniform. Because it has become a culture of the company. (awkward phrasing: perhaps you meant 'It has a become a requirement for all workers in the company') There are many experienced collogues (spelling mistake: colleagues) who have been working at the company for decades. They used to wear a suit. If a new employee dressed informal, he/she would like a staff from another company. (awkward phrasing: perhaps you meant 'the managers would not be persuaded to keep them on')
When it comes to the startup companies, the employees could wear casual clothes in normal time. (corrected by: 'instead of having to wear formal clothes') There are more young people in the startup companies. The relaxing environment let them feel free and creativity. (corrected by: 'relaxed') But on certain days , they are still required to should wear a uniform.

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well done!

21. April 2016

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