Something about myself.

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Very well written!

Something about myself.

Let me introduce myself. My name is Daria and iI'm 26 years old. I would describe myself as a soft and altruistic person, who can becomes very hard and stubborn when it concerns comes to something that is really important to me. I say altruistic, because iI really enjoy helping people. I took part in 3 volunteer projects when I studied at univesity and I remember that time as the best in my life. Before I entered a university I dreamed to of become becoming a psychologist and help helping people with their psychological problems. Maybe it's because I was born on 6 th of May, the same day that Sigmund Freud was born. Only he was born in 1856 in Frieberg. I always want to understand people's true needs and view their true nature. I believe that when people feel valuable valued near me I only gain from such relationships would it be whether it is family, friendship or work. That's why I know how to listen, and i always take other's people's needs seriously. I would say this is a strenght of mine, although some people could overuse exploit this trait aspect of my nature.
One of my weaknesses is that i don't like to be a the center of attention. Public speaking, making a speech before a large group of people, making a toast - these all are difficult experiences for me. But I am working on it. Lately I discovered an international organisation that helps people to improve their speaking skills and develop leadership qualities - The Toastmasters cClub. This is an old educational American educational organization that was founded in 1924 in California. A Toastmasters club adopts a "learn-by-doing" "learn by doing" philosophy, where members take adopt roles and present speeches by of their own choice., and they also arrange some special events like speaking contests and meeting with Toasmasters from other countries. But every Toastmaster have has a program to accomplish. The program consists of ten speech projects, each building upon the others in skills and difficulty. For each project, the member prepares and delivers a speech in front of the club. After completing the ten Competent Communication projects the Toastmaster then can then go on to more advanced projects such as sales presentations and others things. But i'm just in at the beginning of this long path.

Well done, Daria! It may look as though you made a lot of mistakes, but in fact most of my changes are minor. The piece is well constructed, flows naturally and is easily understandable as you wrote it. This is no surprise to me, because I said to you before that your English is very good.

Freud was a great man, so well done for sharing his birthday! I was born on Mahatma Gandhi's birthday - 89 years later - another inspirational figure for me.