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It is so hard to find job for petroleum major students this year This year because the oil price went down and a lot of oil company cut down their jobs, although most Chinese oil companies don't have mass layoff plans, it is sure that they won't hire new people, so a lot of students can't find a job this years.I worked at a software company, our company's products are used by some oil company, so we have some petroleum related position, each year we will hire some new crews, and recently I was doing some HR's job, so everyday I browser hundreds CV, but we only need 3 or 4 people. I feel sorry to the students they were so eager to find a job, but the market just don't need them.

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It is so hard to find job for petroleum majors this year

This year because the oil price went down and a lot of oil company companies cut down their jobs reduced staff, although most Chinese oil companies don't have mass layoff plans, it is sure certain that they won't hire new people, so a lot of students can't find a job this years year. I worked at a software company, our company's products are used by some oil company companies, so we have some petroleum related positions, each year we will hire some new crews staff and recently I was doing some HR's jobs in HR, so everyday I browser hundreds of CV, but we only need 3 or 4 people. I feel sorry to for the students they were so eager to find a job, but the market just don't need them.

Very well written.

The vast majority of errors fall into two categories: watching for plurals, and "we don't say it like that." A company doesn't "cut down their jobs" but rather "reduced staff", "eliminated positions", "reduced headcount" (this one is classified as jargon!), "laid off staff", or "downsized". Not "It is sure that..." but rather "It is certain that..." Not "I feel sorry to..." but "I feel sorry for..."

The term "CV" gave me a little bit of a pause - in America we use the (French?) term résumé for most of these, except those in academia. I understand the British use the term curriculum vitae (or CV).

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不是 只是公司需要相关专业背景的人看一下简历
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人力主管么?

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