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During my studies, I developed critical thinking skills and learned how to deal with complex problems in a more systematic way considering gender discrimination, democratic consolidation, and the role of norms in international level. In order to put democratic consolidation’s theory into practice, I have worked in Albania and Bosnia and Herzegovina being an election’s observer.
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Hi Valerie,
Well done again. This is very well-written, with just a few grammar considerations for you.
The phrase 'the role of norms at international level' is perfectly correct, but I somehow feel that an adjective should come before 'norms', particularly due to the formal nature of this text. For example, you might just say 'international norms'.
Hope this helps! Hugh
my letter (2)
During my studies, I developed critical thinking skills and learned how to deal with complex problems in a more systematic way considering regarding gender discrimination, democratic consolidation, and the role of norms in at international level. In order to put democratic consolidation’s theory into practice, I have worked in Albania and Bosnia and Herzegovina being an election’s observer. as an election observer.Möchten Sie schneller voran kommen?
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