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Life after wrongful conviction I recently read this article : http://www.nytimes.com/2016/05/29/opinion/sunday/life-after-wrongful-conviction.html?action=click&pgtype=Homepage&clickSource=image&module=opinion-c-col-right-region®ion=opinion-c-col-right-region&WT.nav=opinion-c-col-right-region And found it really interesting -- here's my summary of the article. As DNA evidences have increased the number of exonerations, restitution laws of each state have became an issue. Each state has a different range of restitution budget and compensation. In some states, the wrongly convicted individuals have to prove their innocence and some states do not even provide any financial compensation for the time the exonerations spent in the prison. To help the people who wasted the time in prison without being guilty, every state should pass compensation laws and expand ones that already exist. Although these changes in law cannot turn back time, it can help the exonerations to go forward in life.

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Life after wrongful conviction

I recently read this article : http://www.nytimes.com/2016/05/29/opinion/sunday/life-after-wrongful-conviction.html?action=click&pgtype=Homepage&clickSource=image&module=opinion-c-col-right-region®ion=opinion-c-col-right-region&WT.nav=opinion-c-col-right-region

And found it really interesting -- here's my summary of the article.

As DNA evidence has increased the number of exonerations, state restitution laws have become an issue. Each state has a different The restitution and compensation budget of different states vary by a large degree. In some states, the wrongly convicted individuals have to prove their innocence and some states do not even provide financial compensation for the time the exonerated spent in the prison. To help the people who wasted the time in prison without being guilty, every state should pass compensation laws and or expand the ones that already exist. Although these changes in the law cannot turn back time, they can help the exonerated go forward in their life.


Exoneration: The action of exonerating a person

The exonerated: the person who has been exonerated.


Each state has a different range: This puts the emphasis on the "range of compensation that a single state provides" rather than "the difference between states"

Plural goes with plural.

Normally you would write either "even" or "any", not both.


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