My first business
I`d like to tell about our restaurant that we(I and my friend) opened some years ago. It was in the edge of Moscow. We decided to call it as "Manhattan". We spent a lot of money for that restaurant and we hoped that we'd be able to profit from that. But it wasn't simply. The salaries of employees, rent a building and so on... As a result we closed our restaurant.
I've picked out 4 reasons why our business failed and we lost a lot of money.
1. The lack of experience.
The first mistake was that we weren't be ready to that business. We had neither experience nor knowledge. I guess if you are going to open business, at first you must learn theory and if it is possible to practice a lot.
2. The lack of time
The second mistake was hurry. Before to open business you must analyze everything. Unfortunately we had no time...
3. The wrong promotion
The third mistake was ignorance of marketing. The posters of our restaurants appeared after month of opening of the restaurant. It was very absurdly. Then we made the public on social network, but we made it unprofessionally. We also could do advertising actions and different bonuses, but we didn't do anything of those.
4. The extension of business despite the material losses.
The fourth mistake was the hope to success after long time. I think we had to close our business after the second month. Though we bought a lot of things for “Manhattan”, there are few clients.
And it makes no sense to continue that business.
That's all. The main reasons why we couldn't earn money on that. The more you have mistakes, the more you have experience, so I think we've learned many things.
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My first business
I`d like to tell (tell you or speak) about our the restaurant that we(I and my friend my friend and I) opened some years ago. It was in on the edge of Moscow. We decided to call it as "Manhattan". We spent paid a lot of money for that restaurant and we hoped that we'd be able to profit from that it. But it wasn't simply But it wasn't that (or so) simple. The salaries of the employees, renting a building and so on... As a result we closed our restaurant.I've picked out 4 reasons why our business failed and we lost a lot of money.
1. The lack of experience.
The first mistake was that we weren't be ready to go into that business. We had neither experience nor knowledge. I guess if you are going to open business, at first you must learn theory and if it is possible to practice a lot. you should learn the theory first and then put it into practice if you can
2. The lack of time
The second mistake was hurry (haste). Before to opening business you must analyze everything. Unfortunately we had no time...
3. The wrong promotion
The third mistake was ignorance of marketing. The posters of for our restaurants appeared after a month of after the opening of the restaurant. It was very absurdly. Then we made the public publicised it on a social network, but we made did it unprofessionally. We also could have do done other kinds of advertising actions and different bonuses with better results, but we didn't do anything of those them.
4. The extension continuation of the business despite the material heavy losses.
The fourth mistake was the hope to success after long time to continue hoping for too long. I think we had to close our business after the second month. AlThough we bought a lot of things for “Manhattan”, there are were few clients.
And it makes made no sense to continue that business.
That's all. These are The main reasons why we couldn't earn money on that in that business. The more you have mistakes, the more you have experience The more mistakes you make, the more experience you have, so I think we've learned many things.
I have made quite a lot of corrections, but I don't think that it matters, because I think that you are a natural communicator. See my comment too.
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The most important things to understand in business are that income has to be greater that costs and that the business should perform its task in its chosen field with excellence. You had a lot of guts to start the restaurant, although you may only have been dimly aware of it at the time, and this piece of writing was brave too. If you would like to skype with me in English and Russian leave a message via my profile.
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