My daughter
Nineteen months ago I received the biggest gift in my life, my daughter came to my life. I named her "Holly".
She was a beautiful girl. Big eyes, high forehead and full lips that formed a perfect face curve. Eatting and sleeping were her whole life in the first month. But one month later, she started to play and look around. She is a lucky girl, because she always smiles.
Now she is bigger than before, she can call Mom, Dad, grandpa, grandma, sister and brother, aunt and uncle, and simple words.
I hope she grows up with healthy and happy.
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My daughter
Nineteen months ago I received the biggest gift in my life the best present ever (more natural sounding), my daughter came into my life. I named her "Holly".She was a beautiful girl. Big eyes, high forehead and full lips that formed a perfect face curve(I don't understand this.). Eatting Eating and sleeping were her whole life in the first month. But one month later, she started to play and look around. She is a lucky girl, because she always smiles.
Now she is bigger than before (not needed), she can call say Mom, Dad, grandpa, grandma, sister and brother, aunt and uncle, and simple words. (we use 'call' if we want someone to come to us, so we shout their name. e.g. 'Can you call Jack because his dinner is on the table?' Jack needs to come to the table to eat his dinner, so dad shouts his name.)
I hope she grows up with healthy and happy.
Hiya, you sound blessed :) I hope this edit helps. Bye for now, Fiona.
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