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Dear. My friend Dear. My friend Hello. I'm in south Korea, Jeoun-Ju. I'm staying in a wonderful city. I've been to see a church, which is very old structure. Some people was taking a picture in front of a building. And, I've worn a beautiful dress, which called by Han-Bog. Han-Bog is Korea's traditional dress. It was so wonderful. Finally, I've eaten the best Korea food, chi-mec. It's chicken and beer. I'm having the best time of my life. If you have a summer vacation next year, I'd like to visit Korea again with you. I wish you were here. Love from Cynthia.

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Hello my dear friend, (this can sound over the top to a British person. A simple Hi! would be okay. It shows closeness.)

Hi! How're things?

I'm in South Korea, Jeoun-Ju. I'm staying in a  the wonderful city of Jeoun Ju. I've been went to see a church which is was  very old structure. Some people was were taking a pictures in front of a  it building. And, I've also wore a beautiful dress, which called by a Han-Bog. The Han-Bog is Korea's traditional dress which It is so wonderful. Finally, I've also eaten the best Korean food; chi-mec. It's chicken and beer. I'm having the best time of my life! If you have a summer vacation next year, I'd like to visit Korea again with you.
I wish you were here.

Love from Cynthia.


'I'm in South Korea staying in the wonderful city of Jeoun Ju.' Sounds better. By joining two clauses together in this way it makes your English more natural. Lots of short sentences sound odd to a native speaker. Try and join them together where you can. But don't make them too long! ^_^

Enjoy the rest of your trip!

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