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a bit of my life my family is well big , have ten brothers ,five sister and five brothers ,my dad is retired my mom is deceased have four years , i am a student fifteen ,and think that i am happy

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A bit of about my life

my family is, well, big.  I have ten brothers, five sisters and five brothers-in-law .My dad is retired, my mom is deceased, have four years ago   died four years ago ,  and I am a  fifteen year old student fifteen ,and I think that I am happy.
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a bit of my life

My family is well big;  I have ten brothers ,five sisters and five brothers ,my dad is retired my mom passed away four years ago.  I am a student,   fifteen ,and think that I am happy.


Hello Paloma, I added some corrections in yellow. 

Nice Job! 

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a bit of my life

my family is well big , have ten brothers ,five sister and five brothers ,my dad is retired my mom is deceased have four years , i am a student fifteen ,and think that i am happy


A bit about my family

My family is big, I have fifteen brothers and five sisters. My dad is retired, my mom passed away four years ago. I am a fifteen years old student  and I think that I am happy.

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