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Essay help for the toefl in this saturday Some students prefer classes with open discussions between the professor and students and almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer In the educational system of my country, the classes generally are with lectures with few discussions between the professor and students. I all my life, I only had three classes with open discussions and almost no lectures. In my opinion, I prefer classes with lectures and almost no discussions because I feel that I learned more in this kind of classes. I will explore mw experiences with both classes’ styles in the following essay. The classes with open discussions were the exception in my student life. They only happened because my teachers had the desire of making a different dynamic in classroom. Two of them were about the discussion in particular themes of a book. One of these books was a law case about some men that in an agreement decided to make game in which who lost in this game would be eaten by the others. They were in a terrible situation if hunger, almost dying and we discuss about the justice and moral of this case. I remember that the discussion was very productive. However, in the others classes of this type, I do not think that I had learned much, because most of the topics were discussed by the common sense point of view. I did not felt any increase of knowledge in these classes. I believe that this kind of class is better to discuss about interesting topics and point of views of abstract terms, like justice and moral. Furthemore, most of my classes with lectures and almost no discussions were more useful for me. The teachers have a bigger knowledge than the students do, so they talks about the subjectives with much more information. Usually some discussions are important as a support for the lectures. However, in fact, I think that I learn better with the lecture in most of the time, because they are more objective and brings more knowledge to me. In conclusion, I prefer classes with lectures and almost no discussions, because I have learned more in this way and I am most accustomed with this system. I think that classes with open discussions only are interesting if were about some specifics topics, like discussions about what is justice.

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Essay help for the toefl in this saturday

Some students prefer classes with open discussions between the professor and students and almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer



In the educational system of my country, the classes generally are with are generally lectures with few discussions between the professor and students. I In all my life, I have only had three classes with open discussions and almost no lectures. In my opinion, I prefer classes with lectures and almost no discussions because I feel that I learned more in this kind of classes. I will explore mw my experiences with both classes’ styles in the following essay.
The classes with open discussions were the exception in my student life. They only happened because my teachers had the desire of making to make a different dynamic in classroom. Two of them were about the discussion in particular themes of a book. One of these books was a law case about some men that in an agreement decided to make a game in which whoever lost in this game would be eaten by the others. They were in a terrible situation if of hunger, almost dying and we discussed about the justice and morals of this case. I remember that the discussion was very productive. However, in the others classes of this type, I do not think that I had learned much, because most of the topics were discussed by the common sense point of view. I did not felt feel any increase of knowledge (I learned much)  in these classes. I believe that this kind of class is better to discuss about interesting topics and points of views of on abstract terms, like justice and morals.
Furthermore, most of my classes with lectures and almost no discussions were more useful for me. The teachers have a bigger more knowledge than the students do, so they talks about the subjectives  (subjects/topics) with much more information. Usually some discussions are important as a support for the lectures. However, in fact, I think that I learn better with the lecture in most of the time, because they are more objective and brings more knowledge to me.
In conclusion, I prefer classes with lectures and almost no discussions, because I have learned more in this way and I am most accustomed with to this system. I think that classes with open discussions are only are interesting if were we are talking about some specifics topics, like discussions about what justice is.


Hi Laryssa, I can understand the meaning of your essay perfectly but you have a few issues with tenses and specific word collocations.

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