Thanks for your spending time on correcting my article.xie xie ni.

Today, I was required to give a presentation about environmental criminal responsibility in class, but I blew it. I made my preparations too early and found that I forgot the majority of the content in my presentation, which ended up being to poor as a result. I should spend more time on preparing for my presentations and fight harder than the last one. Not bad, but you have a problem that I notice is common in a lot of native Chinese speakers. The comma "," is attached to the preceding word, with a space between the proceeding word. For example, " Today, I was..." This is a correct example. The comma is attached at the end of "today" with a space between the comma and "I". In your article you attached the comma to both words in front and after it. Try to place a space after the comma. Your article was easy to understand and really didn't contain that many glaring mistakes. Feichang hao~