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Wednesday Oct.12 2016
It is the first time that I have written a diary on this website. I'm willing to share my daily life here once or twice a week.I'm trying to write my first article in English this month. Everything has been done well except when it comes to translating Chinese to English, which is the most difficult for me. So I am determined that I will have a go at doing something to improve my English expression, for example writing a short composition here.
(Becise?), I exercised today which I have been doing for three years. I ran 1,200m (in five feet five inches?),and then I finished Ab Ripper X. I'm worn out and hungry but satisfied. What my best gain from it is that I recognize I can do so many things which I didn't believe I could do before. And I see I must make great efforts hardly and wait slowly if I want to achieve my goal. Keep fighting!
Thank you for your reading my diary and modifying it.
Hello Damiao,
Nice writing and I am sure you can do well. There is one word I could not understand - 'Becise' - and one part that didn't make sense in the context - 'in five feet five inches'.
Apart from that just a few small corrections.
Well done
Bob
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