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SPORTS This is a writing practice. I've been asked to do an essay about a topic. I'd apreciate if someone help me to correct it. ---- Should people who are studying or working hard take regular exercise? ---- The topic of the advantages of doing sport every day is known by everybody. Because of some people's lifestyle, they don't use to do exercise regulary, but I think that they should try it in order to have a better life quality. Most of human beings has problemas in their life because they work and study too hard. Workers usually have a very stressful life because they want to be very good professional in their jobs and students always try to do their best, even dedicating many hours at night. At the same time, they could have troubles with thinking clearly and having a good sleep. All these issues could be solve if the practiced some sport every day. On the other side, there are some drawbacks of taking more exercise. The first of them is that the most of the sports are not free and people have to spend money for that. The other one is not having enough time to do any of these activities. To sum up, I consider that everyone would have to practice some sport, because it will improve their lifestyle. While is true that not all of the sports are free and they take time for people, there are other ones that are free, such as running, and they only take no more than forty minutes. I'm sure that it will be worth and it will become them happier.

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This is a writing practice. I've been asked to do an essay about a topic. I'd appreciate if someone help me to correct it.
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Should people who are studying or working too hard do take regular exercise?
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The topic of the advantages of doing daily exercise sport every day is are common knowledge known by everybody. Because of some people's lifestyles, they aren't don't use to doing exercise regularly, but I think that they should try it in order to have a better quality of life life quality.

Most of human beings have has problemas in their lives life because they work and study too hard. Workers usually have a very stressful life because they want to be very good professional in their jobs and students always try to do their best, even dedicating many hours at night.

At the same time, they could have troubles with thinking clearly and having a good sleep. All these issues could be solved if they practiced some sport every day.

On the other side, there are some drawbacks of undertaking more exercise. The first of them is that the most of the sports are not free and people have to spend money for that. The other one is not having enough time to do any of these activities.

In summary To sum up, I believe consider that everyone would have to should practice some sport, because it will improve their lifestyle. While is true that not all of the sports are free and they take time for people, there are other ones that are free, such as running, and they only take no more than forty minutes. I'm sure that it will be worthwhile and they it will be become them happier for it.


I hope this helps!

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