WEEKEND
Yesterday ,i went to the old town in Kashger with my friend who is Uygher .Actually ,it was not the first time for me to the city ,but itwas the first time for me to walk aroud the old town .The old town is in the middle of the Kashger city ,but it is very different ,like two different worlds .I mean Kashger city is modern,but the old town is full of Uygher national characteristics which is also very good .At the lunch time ,My friend recommend a fantastic Uygher restaurant .The food is different too ,but it is absolutely good .Around the old town ,MY friend told me many things about Uygher which make me so shocked .What make me so impressive is The people is very warm .When we go to inside a shop ,the boss say hi to us like an old friend and ask us what can they help us with a smile .
The weekend is good ,and i must thank my friend .And i need to tell you i have many good friends here .ha-ha
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WEEKEND
Yesterday, I went to the an old town in Kashger with my friend who is Uygher. Actually, it was not the first time for me I had gone to the city, but itwas the first time for me to walk aroud the old town.The old town is in the middle of the Kashger city, but it is like living in a different world. Kashger is a modern city, but the old town is full of Uygher national characteristics, such as...(list some characteristics) which is also very good. At the lunch time, my friend recommended a fantastic Uygher restaurant. Although the food is was different too, but it is was absolutely good delicious. Around the old town, My friend showed me around the town and told me many things about Uygher which left me feeling amazed. What made feel me so impressed was the warmth of the people in the town. When we go to went inside a shop, the boss said hi to us like an old friend and asked with a smile what can he help us with.The weekend was good and I must thanked my friend. I need to tell people that I made many good friends there .ha-ha
If you use absolutely in a sentence, you should choose a word that shows a higher quality than just good ...
The word "shocked" usually has negative connotation. Example, I'm shocked that she divorced her husband, but I'm amazed that she was able to write a self-help book about marriage.
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