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John Alex did not like mathematics and he did not get good grades, so I gave him tutorials three times a week, I tried to make it more dynamic as possible, we worked in addition, subtraction, sets, mathematical reasoning, we developed math guides, played with abacus, dice, dominos, we did sets with fruits and objects that we had on hand, we cut and glued pictures, painted with tempera, played interactive games online, listened songs of numbers, observed the nature to learn the shapes, among others activities. In breaks I prepared something to eat as sandwiches of chicken they like so much, we became good friends because he is a very friendly, creative and intelligent, I sometimes go to his presentations at school, he is an excellent dancer, he improved its performance level and also his attitude in the classroom.
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John Alex did not like mathematics and he did not get good grades, so I gave him tutorials three times a week. I tried to make it more dynamic as possible. We worked on addition, subtraction, sets, and mathematical reasoning. We developed math guides, played with abacus, dice, and dominoes. We did sets with fruits and objects that we had on hand, we cut and glued pictures, painted with tempera, played interactive games online, listened songs of numbers, and observed the nature to learn the shapes, among others activities. During breaks, I prepared something to eat: chicken sandwiches that they like so much. We became good friends because he is a very friendly, creative and intelligent. I sometimes go to his presentations at school. he is an excellent dancer, He improved his performance level and also his attitude in the classroom.Good work! The changes I suggest are highlighted in orange. In English, we tend to use shorter sentences and limit them to just a few subjects. I've corrected your word order in just one or two places. And I removed a sentence that seemed to be off topic. Hopefully, these suggestions will be helpful. Good luck!
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