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Melisa
A bad weekend. This weekend have been the worst. There was many negative things that I had to bear. Normally I am a person enjoyable and full of optimism . But these two days I only was a irritating person. I only showed the bad part of me, and I know that it is not fair for people who don't have the blame. Anyway, I hope things would better for me =)

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A bad weekend.

This weekend was the worst! There were many negative things that I had to bear. Normally I am a person enjoyable and full of optimism I am usually a positive person full of optimism, but these (past) two days I only was a irritating person made me irritated. I only showed the bad part of me, and I know that it is not fair for people who don't have the blame.  I showed this side of me and wasn't fair to people who were not to blame.

Anyway, I hope things would get better for me =)


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A bad weekend.

This weekend was the worst. There were many negative things that I had to bear. Normally I am an enjoyable person enjoyable and full of optimism. But for the last two days I have been an irritating person. I only showed the bad part(s) of me, and I know that it is not fair for people (who don't have the blame/who don't deserve it.)

Anyway, I hope things would get better for me =)


:)

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Anthony's correction is good. I have one other suggestion:


There were many negative things that I had to deal with. 

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