example of ielts task 1 ( text excercise + my solution)
The graph illustrates the english students ability to speak other languages in 2000, compared to 2010. Overall it can be seen a significant increase in the proportion of foreing language students. At the same time the percentage of poliglots slightly increased over the period. The proportions of french speakers moderately decreased, on the contrary spanish speakers increased. In addition the study of german remained constant. The interest of studying different languages increased as the percentage of other language speakers has become higher.
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Example Of IELTS Task 1 (Text Exercise + My Solution)
The graph illustrates British students' ability to speak other languages in 2000, compared to 2010. Overall, a significant increase can be seen in the percentage of foreign language students. At the same time, the percentage of polyglots slightly increased over time. The percentage of French speakers moderately decreased, compared to Spanish speakers which increased. In addition, the study of German remained constant. The interest of studying different languages increased as the percentage of other language speakers increased.
Nicely written Giulio! I did notice some mistakes with proper nouns such as with names of languages, or nationalities, and also regarding spelling, and word choice. All in all though I think you did well! If you have any questions, please let me know! If you would like to practice and improve your English, I'd be happy to help you!
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