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today I'm at work today like always, It's a quite day and i'm no so much busy however I have a little free time to write here. I ask to my collegue if want to get a coffe with me in five minutes when I will finish to write here. It's a a cloudy day and it's very cold but here in my place don't snowing. This evening I am going to go to football training though it will be very cold . Thanks for having hear me, I go to have a break . Thanks

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I'm at work today like always; it's a quiet day, so and I'm not too busy, which means  I have some free time to write something here.

I asked my colleague whether he wanted to have a coffee with me when I have finished writing, which will be done in 5 minutes.(past tense, assuming you have already asked him)

I will ask ....( you have not asked him yet)



It's a cloudy day and it's very cold, even though it is not snowing in my place.

This evening, I am going for my football training, although /even though/it is going to be very cold.

This evening, I am going for my football training, despite the cold weather.


This evening, I am going for my football training, in spite of the cold weather.



Thanks for listening to me; I have to take a break for now.

Thanks

I'm at work today like always, It's a quite day /   I'm at work today like always, It's a quite day > You have committed a comma mistake here ( comma slice). You tried to join to independent sentences with a comma -- that's wrong.

You can either break them into 2 > I'm at work today like always.  It's a quiet day.

You can use a conjunction  (to connect) > I'm at work like always , and its a quiet day. 
Or, you can use the semi-colon, which is stronger than the comma ( has a longer pause) to join them , but the 2 sentences have to be closed related. > I went home; he went to somewhere else ok    I went home; the bus was late > wrong (not related to one another)

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today

I'm at work today like always. It's a quite day. and I'm no so much busy however, I have a little free time to write here.

I ask to my colleague if he wants to get a coffee with me in five minutes after I finish writing here. when I will finish to write here.

It's a a cloudy day and it's very cold but here it isn't snowing. in my place don't snowing.

This evening I am going to go to football training even though it will be very cold .

Thanks for listening. I'm going to take a break. having hear me, I go to have a break .

Thanks

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