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WRITING AN ESSAY Athough smoking is the reason for many health problems I believe that it not should be made illegal, but some limitations are necessary. Firstly, it is true that smokers have more probability to get lung cancer than others. However, many people which have never smoked die for lung cancer as well. Secondly, pollution from transports or industries can be as dangerous as tabacco for health problems. On the other hand, smoking is a habit that someone choose so, if it is not your choice you have to be respected from people who smoke, to avoid the passive smoking. For this reason is important that smoke is forbidden in public places. A further point is about the economy. Tabacco generates a lot of money with high taxes. If tabacco is illegal I think that it would promote the black market as it is happening with others illegal drugs. To sum up, I believe that smoking should be allowed but with some limitations. Respecting public places or rising the age limit to get tabacco, are some examples.

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WRITING AN ESSAY

Although smoking is the reason for many health problems I believe that it not should not be made illegal, but some limitations are necessary.

Firstly, it is true that smokers have more a higher probability to get lung cancer than others. However, many people which who have never smoked die for from lung cancer as well.

Secondly, pollution from transports or industries can be as dangerous as taobacco for health problems. On the other hand, smoking is a habit that someone chooses so, if it is not your choice, you have the right to be respected from people who smoke, [and/in order] to avoid the passive smoking. For this reason it is important that smoking is be forbidden in public places.

A further point is about the economy. Taobacco generates a lot of money with high taxes. If taobacco is illegal I think that it would promote the black market as it is happening with others illegal drugs.

To sum up, I believe that smoking should be allowed but with some limitations. Respecting public places or rising raising the age limit to get taobacco, are some examples.

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