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2 years ago I took part in the Intelligence Olympiad by law. In spite of that fact that I hadn’t prepared for it absolutely, I could score half points!
After the finish of that competition my tutor and I drank a cup of coffee. Then I bent my steps towards the shopping centre to buy a dress for my prom. Honestly speaking, I had wanted to take it on lease, because it would be quite cheap, but my superstitious grandfather had banned that idea.
So, I had to find my dress in the shop. When I did that wandering around the shopping centre I turned upset over the monotony! There were the same clothes ! Fortunately ,I still found a good variation OF MY DRESS!
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Just a story
2* years ago I took part in the Intelligence Olympiad by law**. In spite of that fact that I hadn’t fully prepared for it absolutely, I could scored half points!After the finish of that competition, my tutor and I drank a cup of coffee. Then I bent turned my steps towards the shopping centre to buy a dress for my prom. Honestly speaking, I had wanted to take it on lease***, because it would be quite cheap, but my superstitious grandfather had banned that idea.
So, I had to find my dress in the shop. When I did that wandering As I wandered around the shopping centre I turned got upset over the monotony! There were the same clothes ! The clothes were all the same! Fortunately ,I still found a good variation OF MY DRESS!****
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Notes:
* In casual writing (a text message), you can use the numeral. In any formal or professional writing, you would write out the word "Two"
** "I took part in the Intelligence Olympiad by law." (the part in blue) implies that you would have gone to jail if you didn't go the Intelligence Olympiad. Is that what you meant?
*** US English - "rent it" rather than "take it on lease"
**** I don't quite understand what you mean by the part in blue. It seems to say that you already had a dress and you found one almost exactly like it at the store (maybe a different size or color). Is that what you meant?
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Just a story
2 years ago I took part in the Intelligence Olympiad by law. In spite of that fact that I hadn’t prepared for it absolutely, I could scored half points!After the finish of that competition my tutor and I drank a cup of coffee. Then I went to bent my steps towards the shopping centre to buy a dress for my prom. Honestly speaking, I had wanted to take it on lease, because it would be quite cheap, but my superstitious grandfather had banned that idea.
So, I had to find my dress in the shop. When I did that was wandering around the shopping centre I became (or got) turned upset over by the monotony! There were the same clothes ! Fortunately ,I still found a good variation OF MY DRESS!
I bent my steps towards - this is a very old fashioned turn of phrase.
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